There she lay amidst the rain,
Crying her heart out - the tears of pain.
The tiger in her, waiting to prance,
But not a single soul to spare a glance.
She closes her eyes - the images of the feud,
Tries her best but cannot elude.
A flash of lightening - a thunder bolt,
Her remains lie there - memories afloat.
-Chithroobeni
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Do you really want me to believe that you WROTE it??!!
Impossible!
Anyhow, if you DID write this one, it's amazing! Keep writing!
October 27, 2008 at 9:06 PM
October 28, 2008 at 1:44 PM
hmmm still cant believe that you wrote this!!!!
so much sorrow filled in you eh??did ahem ahem hurt u so much??
any way sill the dedication is missing:-)
October 28, 2008 at 1:46 PM
hey chitru..nice to see you've started blogging.. you've got a good style (of using english)..keep posting.. Happy blogging :)
PS: visit mine-http://www.singularity-dj.blogspot.com/
and let me know how it looks :)
October 30, 2008 at 5:05 AM
The poem is amazing! It has intricate feelings. Good job on it!!
November 9, 2008 at 11:16 AM
Sorry!! I forgot to put our names into the previous comment.
Akane Tendo-- Nilina here!! With Manasa!
November 9, 2008 at 11:17 AM